That's because you're 1337 Xellos. You have ninj4 1337n3ss XD
Yesh, hopefully having to write short stories will reinvigorate your muse some. Or mayhap when your artsy muse starts getting overworked she'll start complaining and wake the prose muse up, heh heh.
Now, for those colours...
Sattisi:
The girl being held onto is easy. Sort of XD Her hair is dark brown and all glamourized and shiny like it's been nuked with Pantene ProV. Her skin is a sort of middle ground between fairskinned and lightly tanned, she has a little colour but not too much. Her eyes are a clear green, almost like a green glass bottle. The peircings above her eyebrow are silver studs and her tattoos are both black with the cross being a nice bloody red colour. Her jackety thing is shiny black leather with the zip pull being silver like the peircings.
As for the other girl, she's as dull as the other girl is shiny. Her hair is a dark, blackish-green and her skin is a pale, drained sort of colour. Kind of like vampire skin, because she has so many open wounds all over her and thus doesn't have much blood to make her look lively. She has plenty of bloody cuts on her forhead, a couple on her cheeks, the bandaged and unbandaged ones on her arm, cracked and bloody fingernails, a hole in the back of the hand with the bandages and an open wound on her torso. Go crazy with the blood XD Her normal eye is the same colour as the other girl's eyes only less vibrant, the other is all bloodshot and is a creepy yellow-green colour. Her little lip rings are dark coloured, kind of like tarnished iron. Her shirt and pants are tan coloured, with dark leathery belts and the bandages are off-white or they would be if they weren't all blood stained and stuff.
Youngd:
You should have never offered to do special effects XD since this one could use one. Well, enough with the blahing.
There's another picture in my DA account, evil and hideous as if may be, that has all of Da-hjok's colouring nice and handy. It is
here. Though, I would add a bit more brassiness to the blonde part of his hair, enough to make it more goldish instead of that cornflower colour I've got going on there. And since the shine is playing merry hell with how his streaks look, I'll go ahead and list them. They're a soft brown, platinum-metal (sort of like the silvery part of Oris' hair) and black. His coat is still that crazy weird greenish colour and his slacks are still white. The only blood in this picture, as I said in my Comment, is the little drip on his cheek. His earrings are also green, the same kind of wonky green in his coat.
Now for the effect! If you could, could you give him some little ethereal looking red wings? Sort of like the wings in
this but smaller and red instead of white.
Have fun ^__^