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QuoteYes.. poor Kimiko. She really does like him if you read my last post. :shock:
Pretty much used the blue light for escape, but yeah it's destruction. Yeah I know she does, which makes it even better. *evil cackle* Lazuli will eventually come around, I just am having him fun going after a girl he can't have. Break some hearts, steal some kisses... *Lazuli makes sure Lokun didn't hear that*
QuoteBut why would an ice guy be after Kimiko if the secret all along is that hs'es incvinciable? See.. She is searching for the secret, and onece she sees the secret for herself she becomes invinciable. That's why all these people are tying to keep her away from it. They murdered her parents because her parents were going to show her the secret.
I'm confused. So if she finds the secret she gets this power? That's why they are keeping her away from it? What is the secret/thing that will cause this? Or you just haven't thought of it yet? Or is it in her, but not awakened?
It still makes sense if her parents were going to show her the secret, and the bad guy tried to prevent this from happening. Maybe at the last moment it was revealed who this girl was, it was your character. Maybe her parents worked at the castle/palace or something and got involved. I dunno. Just tossing out thoughts. :D
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OK…soo…Ice guy isn't all-powerful, haven't really gotten everything down with him. Hmm. Maybe her parents were not suppose to tell her the secret because ice guy said so, and it was told to her parents they would have to sacrifice Kimiko for “the cause�. LOL. Because by Kimiko’s sacrifice Mr. Ice guy has enough power to ice the world. They didn’t, were going to tell her, and to this day he is trying to stop her from finding out anything…now what the hell is that “anything�? LOL. Right now he’s too weak to actually kill her, especially since Lazuli is the only one who can do it, and sucking the power out and bringing it back to Mr. bad guy. So yeah having them fall in love sounds GRAND. *evil laughter…cough-cough…chokes on gnat*
Come on brain! *smacks head against table* You can DO IT!
Because just using his ice powers a little makes him weak. Woot! Thus...oh I feel it coming! Something good! He created Lazuli mostly to get this one person, but Mr. bad guy didn't know who this person was early on why a lot of people had to DIE, just knew this person who could stop him plus also be the battery he needed to nuke the place, So he killed anyone at first who showed just a little sign of being “something�. Lazuli killed with the sword and had a way of trapping the power/energy of the person who died in it and bringing it back to his Father/Master. But the bad ice guy was scared still and gave Lazuli this Faerie’s kiss, so Lazuli can be used as a weapon against Kimiko in case Kimiko found that secret and came after him or something... Ooh, talk about conflict!
But eh, don't want them hog the entire spotlight…so we should come up with something cool so no one is left out.