I had finished my first supernatural story a long time ago. And I just finished its sequel tonight so I felt like posting it up to get some feedback. I've also been wondering weather to continue with a spin-off or just let it end and work on one of my other stories.
If you think it sucks at least tell me why so I can improve.
The first (//http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1756968)
The second (//http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1858002)