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Started by Anonymous, August 08, 2005, 06:00:16 PM

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I had finished my first supernatural story a long time ago. And I just finished its sequel tonight so I felt like posting it up to get some feedback. I've also been wondering weather to continue with a spin-off or just let it end and work on one of my other stories.
If you think it sucks at least tell me why so I can improve.

The first
The second