Well, since two of you have replied. I have a story that I have put a lot of work into and am very fond of. I will post it, but bare with me, my grammar and spelling are off! I would also love critism on my story. Here it is:
Story
In the times of old, there was a very powerful concil of dragons. These dragons secretly governed the universe for they were the most intelligent creatures within. There were seven dragons in all: The Fire Dragon, The Water Dragon, The Earth Dragon, The Wind Dragon, The Lightning Dragon, The Darkness Dragon, and The Silver Dragon which was the most powerful of them all, for the Silver Dragon held the inner powers of the universe.
As time went by, the universe started to swirl our of their control. Demons and monsters started to over take their beautiful universe, making the dragons weak from using constant waves of energy to keep the demons at bay. From this rising of evil, a greater force than even the dragons themselves spawn. His name was Kain, and he was the ultimate demon! Slowly, he formed a group of seven of the most powerful demons in the universe, banning together to take control of the dragons.
They were sucessful in their mission, but the great Silver Dragon was able to get away from the corruption. She flew off to Earth, turning into her human form and found a man name Kal Lord. These two fell in love, and over time, had a son, born to be half man, half Silver Dragon. His mother once had a vision of his future, and it seemed that he could save this universe from the corruption.
Silver had to leave the planet, for she knew the demon Kain would be after her child. Marik was to stay with his father Kal Lord, and train to become a powerful warrior. Marik's father was the most powerful man on Earth at that time, having made his own style of knight he called, "Ballistic Knights". This was not the style taught to Marik however, for the Ballistic Knights were to use what were called "Shield Axes" and Marik always prefered a sword.
He grew quickly as a warrior, just as his father thought he would. At the age of 5, he had already surpassed his father in strength, but still had much more to learn. When he turned 6, a young lizard boy came to live with him and his father to train as a Ballistic Knight. This lizards name was, Syrus! Syrus was a very powerful young man-lizard, completing the apprentice training within the first two years of his stay.
Marik and Syrus became friends very quickly, though they were also rivals with fighting strength. Marik was always a few steps ahead of Syrus, but Syrus could take down Marik from time to time. Syrus left the small home after a few more years, returning back to the large city that now covered Earth to hone his skills.
Two years later after Syrus left, Marik was 17. One night, as he was sleeping, two men stormed into their home, looking for the young boy. Kal fought the men off as best as he could, but they were too strong. Seeing his father being cut down, Marik's mind snaps, sending him into the deepest form of dragon that he could go, he has come to call it, "Dragon Rage". As he did this, the men looked upon him with fear. Without any emotion, he brutally killed the two demons and ran.
A year later, he was captured by Kain's men and taken into a dugeon. For three years, he was tourchered and beaten. He only got to eat once a week, and Kain always talked about "Finding something within Marik". Eventually, Kain had ripped off Marik's wings, cut off his left arm, and burned out his right eye. Marik escaped while Kain was away, and now he wonders the giant city they call Earth, looking to take Kain's head for he has done to Marik's family.
