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Started by Anonymous, May 14, 2010, 07:41:36 AM

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Anonymous

Hello everyone. I put a lot of work into my bios, and I was hoping to hear some reviews on my first one. First off, my main question is does this character and his history fit into this site?

Here is a link to the bio.

Feel free to comment on the writing style, as well as the character in it's self.

Anonymous

Sounds like he definitely fits to me. There's such a huge variety of character types, species, races, and stories around here that a character like yours, with a definite link to the setting you've place him in, he'd fit right in. You have some great potential for long term plottage there anyway since as your little guy grows his magic will probably be a lot harder to hide in Connlaoth.

Anonymous

Thank you for, responding. I'm a bit more situated now, compared to when I first posted this, but I still appreciate you taking the time to stop and post this.