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Eh, feh, my best poems -.-

Started by Anonymous, July 12, 2005, 07:47:42 AM

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Anonymous

I, uhm, have alot of poems @_@ Critique, kill, Iunno. Say whatever ya want. Or say nothing at all.

Twisted Promise
Lets make this lie last forever,
All those promises of yesterday,
Tomorrow simply never came,
Today is just another day,
Another day to waste away,
In our Twisted Paradise.

Lies
I want you all to know,
That looks can be decieving,
For what you see and know,
Is one of the many lies I've told.

Save
Through your screams,
I noticed a constant whisper,
It told me to save,
And save what I wondered,
So I saved myself the trouble and let your promises run scarlet,
I thought I was saving you, too,
But the chains bound to my wrists say something different.

Threads
Disentangle the many threads,
Unweave the woven tapestry,
And lay each strand upon the ground,
Gaze upon the rainbow colors,
And light the match,
And what once was is now no more.

Dark Days
Through dark days,
Watch for a beacon in the night,
For I will always try to find you,
And guide your through the darkest hours,
To return you to your cradle of light,
My dear friend, I am always here.

No Tears
Shed no more tears,
The agony I see,
Shatters my heart,
And inward I do weep,
Deeper I fall into my sorrow,
With how helpless I feel,
Lost in a vast sea with no way to land.

Written Words
Death of thousands,
Tears of millions,
Unseen tragedies,
That marr us so horribley,
Our only reminder,
Besides the false written words.

Sleep
Painted gray by a shadowed sun,
The air is still and silent,
The full and ample silver sphere,
The only witness to my crime,
All else is lying down to sleep,
Just as I lay you in your earth carved ditch.

Innocence and Sin
Touched by the innocence of a summer sky,
My own tarnished by the sin of life.

Remember
When the sun begins to see,
And all you see are the shadows in their wake,
Remember me in the dying of the light,
For I am all who remains.

All are made and created by me. All mine, yes, the lowsiness belongs to MEH. xp

Anonymous

The one called Save is brilliant, I loved it.

Anonymous

I have to agree with duckie Save is brilliant but Twisted Promise and
Remember has to be my favorites.  keep writing for all your poems are great.