Hi everyone,
I have an original fiction story in the works, and I would really appreciate it if some of you could have a quick read over the outline. Feel free to pick holes in it, ask questions, suggest new ideas...anything you like. Either leave a comment in the journal (but please tell me who you are if you do that!) or post your thoughts in this thread.
The outline lives here
//http://fizzylizard.livejournal.com/66904.htmlThank you for your help.
