This was written for a school assignment, and I noticed that this board was quite empty and lonely. So I am going to be the first to post on it. :D
The sun leaves every night,
But it always comes back.
The stars leave every morning,
But they always come back.
The snow melts every spring,
But it always comes back.
The leaves disappear every autumn,
But they always come back.
You left...
Aw. -Claps.- Bravo, Bravo!!
That's really good, I liked it very much.
Nice.
I'm impressed.
Awwww! That's sad... ;_;
But I like it! Nice, dark twist there...and love the comparisons!
Thanx everyone! My teacher, bless her heart, gave me a single comment: Like the ending. She was obviously very busy. I usually despise writing poetry, but this particular poem allowed my feelings out.