ok here is another poem that i have written, the first poem is the newer on , welll its the newwe posted one and so without futher ado, here is Jeremy Dies Tonight, edited by my own personal editor duckie!!!!!
Jeremy Dies Tonight
Overdosed and drowning he is tonight.
Drinking the cheap beer he stole, smoking the dope he has,
Being the only one in the room, but that is where his friends lie.
He thinks he has to run away, yet I stand by, just to
Watch him fall,
With open arms, for he comes down fast,
Only to catch him, bleeding and torn.
Messed up and hyped up, he passes through life with a
Smile,
Only to disguise the open wound still seeping blood,
Staining his life for a while.
Now, on the ledge of the bridge in the fog;
In his mind he is not quite sure why he is there.
He figures he is already half-past dead and might as well finish the job,
To disappear from the world, to fly away from his despair.
He takes a deep breath, his last one for the night,
Not noticing the one who still loves him with her might . . .
And so, Jeremy dies tonight.
here is the older one with no title and unedited.
what do you do when the depression sinks in?
what do you do when the self pity comes again?
what do you do when the confusion sets in?
why, you drown your sorrow
in beers and drugs
in pleasures and play
in work or games
with a knife or a pill
with a shot or a kill
it doesn't matters
as long it goes away.
laura a.
6/17/05
12:28 AM
